Self Evaluation

1. What score do you think you deserve? 

I think I could deserve 1 point. I observed my time limit and completed a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument. However, I failed to search meaningful materials which can be good grounds of my argument.

2. What did you do well?

- I think I searched various countries' examples for my grounds.

- I think I really tried hard to concatenate my argument with today's issue.

3. What could you have done better?

- I think I could start my introduction more creatively, using another examples.
- I think I could find more statistical evidence, but I failed to do it.

4.Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

 I think my refutation and concession part is the best. Because actually my topic is very controversial, I think I need to refute opponent's opinion effectively to improve my argument. Therefore, I really tried to make it better hard.

5. Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly? 

 I think my narration part is most poor. Actually, I think I failed to understand its own purpose to be used effectively.

6. What's your strategy to make your second draft better?

I need to reconsider my position about this topic. I always think my argument can be most convincing. However, there are lots of opposing opinion unexpectedly. And, I should also reinforce my research more and more.