The Introduction

My Introduction

In Korea, there was very serious and terrible accident, the sinking of Sewol Ferry, last April. Many people have criticized government's action about this terrible accident. Also, the Commissioner of the Jeju police agency committed sexual assaults and has been criticized. To prevent these corruption of high-ranking government officials, people should elect right person as officials. In this situation, should prisoners be allowed to vote? Actually, prisoners who committed serious crimes and were sentenced to more than three years are likely to reoffend. Then, should we believe them one more time? I can't believe their judgement and think they can bring confusion in our society. Thus, prisoners should not be allowed to vote.

1. Attention grabber

 I attracted the audience by suggesting some serious social issues in Korea.

2. Explains the topic

 After attention grabber, I saw the actual cause of this social issues is wrong election, especially prisoners who can't make rational decisions.

3. My thesis

 My topic is Prisoners should not be allowed to vote in Korea. I think there can be no tolerance to make society stable.